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　　2021年6月5日

　　雅思笔试写作真题

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　　大作文题目

　　The family has great influence on children’s development, but the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part in children’s life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　写作思路

　　关于家庭和其他因素对于孩子成长的影响，家庭的影响主要来自父母的家庭教育。父母是孩子的第一任老师，孩子模仿父母并且听从父母。良好的家教有助于孩子成才，反之则不利于孩子成长。当孩子上学之后，来自学校的影响似乎更大。老师系统地传授知识，让孩子在学业方面取得进步，同时老师规范孩子的行为，为孩子树立榜样。此外，与学校同龄人的交往互动也深刻影响到孩子的发展。

　　重点词汇与语料

　　multiple factors 多种因素

　　play an indispensable role 发挥不可或缺的作用

　　childhood years童年

　　life skills生活技能

　　distinguish right from wrong分辨是非

　　set a good example树立榜样

　　become valuable members of society成才

　　impart knowledge传授知识

　　in a systematic manner系统地

　　make progress 取得进步

　　role models 榜样

　　settle a dispute解决争论

　　contribute to the community为社区做贡献

　　parenting approach育儿方法

　　参考范文

　　Every child is influenced by multiple factors in his or her growth. Compared with the family, other factors from outside the home seem to have greater influence on children’s development.

　　Parents are considered as children's first teachers, playing an indispensable role in children’s growth, particularly in their childhood years. Parents are the first to help children to learn basic life skills and the ability to distinguish right from wrong. Children tend to imitate what their parents do and follow how their parents behave. If parents could set a good example, children would be more likely to become valuable members of society. By contrast, the wrong methods of parenting can be harmful to children’s growth.

　　However, after children enter school, other factors have greater influence on their development than parents do. First and foremost, teachers in school impart children knowledge of various subjects in a systematic manner so that children can make progress in academics and prepare for future careers. Teachers are also expected to be students’ role models, guiding them in behavior and correcting their mistakes. In addition, school is a wider community where children spend most of time living and studying together with their peers from different backgrounds. This experience is important in children’s growth, which teaches them how to interact positively with others, to settle a dispute and to contribute to the community.

　　In conclusion, parenting approaches affect children’s abilities, values and behavior, especially during pre-school years. After children start school, this influence still exists but other factors from outside of the family play a larger role in children’s development.

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