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4月6日雅思笔试写作真题全解析|附高分范文

4月6日雅思笔试写作真题全解析|附高分范文
2024年04月07日 14:01 新浪网 作者 雅思哥

  大作文题目

  Somepeople say advertising has positive economic effects. Others think it has negativesocial impacts because it will make people dissatisfied with who they are andwhat they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  题目解读

  在商业社会中,广告无处不在,对于促进经济发展发挥了重要作用。主要体现在为消费者提供信息,刺激消费,鼓励厂家竞争和创新,增强市场活力。但是对于社会而言,广告也制造了焦虑。一些明星代言的广告,以及广告中宣扬的时尚,使得消费者不断扔旧买新,甚至将广告宣传和自身现状进行不切实际的对照,产生对自我的不满。

  参考范文

  Whether we likeit or not, advertising has become an integral aspect of our lives. While somepeople believe that advertising contributes positively to the economy, othersthink its negative effects on society are concerning.

  Advertisingbrings about positive economic effects by stimulating consumer demand anddriving economic growth. Through marketing campaigns, businesses effectivelypromote their products or services, resulting in increased sales and revenue.Furthermore, advertising fosters competition among businesses, which can leadto improved product quality, constant innovation, and lower prices forconsumers. Thus, advertising plays an important role in economic development,contributing to overall prosperity and vitality in the marketplace.

  However, somepeople are concerned that watching advertisements can negatively influencepeople’s attitudes towards life and themselves. To attract consumers’attention, companies often hire celebrities to advertise their products. Theseadvertisements feature popular stars’ good looks and luxurious lifestyles,making consumers dissatisfied with their ordinary lives and encouraging them toreplace their belongings with the new ones endorsed by their idols. Also, thefashionable elements involved in the advertisement cause anxiety. Consumers areworried about being out of fashion as described in the advertising, and thusfollow the trend to buy the recommended goods, regardless of price. Somepeople, especially youth, compete with others in material ways.

  In my opinion,advertising is crucial for economic activities. It serves as the primary sourceof information for consumers when making buying decisions. Due to itspersuasive appeal, advertising undoubtedly prompts people to make morepurchases. This stimulation of consumption benefits the economy, but at thesame time, it can cause confusion in people’s values. Therefore, living in aworld where advertisements are omnipresent, we should promote responsibleadvertising by companies and encourage critical thinking among consumers.

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  重点词汇/语料

integral必要的
concerning 令人担忧的
stimulate刺激
campaign活动
revenue收入
foster培养
innovation创新
prosperity繁荣
vitality活力
marketplace市场
feature作为特征
luxurious奢华的
endorse代言
idol偶像
fashionable时尚的
anxiety焦虑
regardless  of不考虑
persuasive有说服力的
appeal吸引力
prompt促使
confusion混乱
omnipresent无处不在的
critical  thinking批判思维
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