雅思哥学霸FM ：国家传统

　　参见7.5巨佬~这题如果是你该怎么发挥呢？亮点1.内容丰富，对于新年的各个传统描述细致（pocket money, new year dishes, family reunion, watch firework, etc)2.词汇运用自然，运用了地道搭配，例如, no set day, mark the end of the coldest day, stay up on the Chinese New Year’s eve3.语法结构复杂多变，使用了较多从句例如which引导的定语从句（which symbolizes the harvest..)等4.语言节奏自然，发音标准5.使用了自然的填充词，例如so, you know6.衔接自然 The most important part is .../ Another very interesting tradition is...不足1.部分句子的语言节奏需要改进，偶尔在一句话中停顿多次（Another/very interesting/er tradition/er/ is...2.少数自我纠正(during --on Chinese new year’s eve)